Neat story there.
Cool end picture.
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1-ceth
Agen, there are a few spelling errors, capitalization needs to be done and punctuation.
C.apitalization
U.sage/Understanding
P.unctuation
S.pelling
Check each off as you finish and read it aloud. Sometimes when you read it in your head, your brain translates it to what we want it to be. You could also have Microsoft Sam read it for u.
brmalone
who cares thay sometimes have a guy that prof reads it so why should i do his work 4 him and also:
everybody's a critic