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THE TALE OF VINCENT

Posted by brmalone - April 11th, 2009


a knight a hero a legend a myth.Something that should not have been forgotten was lost

decades ago there was a town home to some of the bravest knights and dragonslayer in the land.people were nice children were playing on the streets,merchants were bringing goods to the town market.some of the priests called the town paradise because of the feeling they got just from living there.

But one day a great darkness sweep across the land children were killed and murdurd old woman were slaughtered,the bishops prayed for a hero to come and save the but no one came to them in their our of need.Everybody was to afraid to go to the town for they knew the darkness would destroy them.

on the place outside the front entrance a inscription wrote''A great evil walks the earth'' almost ass if the darkness has made the town it's home.

People prayed and prayed but nobody came.But one day........the front gates were opened to an unlikely hero a paladin.

the paladin came from as if from nowhere as he smighted the darkness back to the abyss and seal it away forever.the towns people cheers for there new hero.the paladin then rode back into the horizon as the people cheers for him.

almost a year past since the paladin saved the town.the paladin was known from that they on as god's right hand for how he saved the town's people.then other towns called for the hero but he never came some people say he never existed and neither this the darkness he sealed away.

one thay the darkness that the hero sealed away came back and engulfed the town in ever lasting darkness.one day the arch bishop talked to the darkness and asked what it wanted the darkness replied,''I want the paladin''.the people prayed for there hero but he never came.to this day the town is still trapped in darkness and the people still pray for the paladin to come back and save them and the darkness still waits for his enemy to return waiting,waiting,waiting

the end

THE TALE OF VINCENT


Comments

Agen, there are a few spelling errors, capitalization needs to be done and punctuation.

C.apitalization
U.sage/Understanding
P.unctuation
S.pelling

Check each off as you finish and read it aloud. Sometimes when you read it in your head, your brain translates it to what we want it to be. You could also have Microsoft Sam read it for u.

who cares thay sometimes have a guy that prof reads it so why should i do his work 4 him and also:
everybody's a critic

Neat story there.
Cool end picture.